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Alice Human Sacrifice Eng. by ~balnibarbi:iconbalnibarbi:





Meiko: Once upon a time, in a land far away, there was a little dream.

Kaito: No one knew who dreamt it. Such a truly tiny dream it was.

Miku: The little dream thought, "I don't want to vanish like this, how do I get people to notice me?

Rin: The little dream thought and thought, and finally came up with an answer.

Len: "If I can get people to wander into me, they can create their own Wonderland that they can't escape..."

Meiko:
The first Alice, brave and tall, a woman of the Spade
Sword in hand through Wonderland she carved a path of red
Whether strange or beautiful, she killed them all the same
Only looking towards the road she followed to the end.

That Alice was led deep into the woods
Locked within a forest gate, never to be seen again
Though she cried and struggled, there was no way to escape
Lost inside the path she followed, thus was her fate

Kaito:
Second Alice, man of diamond, fairly tame and kind
Sang a song in Wonderland for everyone to hear
The sound was strange and beautiful, his voice rang near and far
Drove them all to madness as he laughed and sang some more.

That Alice was shot right between the eyes
Bullet from a madman put a sorry end to his life
A single rose bloomed from the wound, its petals bloody red
Smiling softly even as he breathed his final breath

Miku:
The third Alice, child of Clover, fairest of them all
A pretty face in wonderland, like never seen before
Her gaze was strange and beautiful, it captured many hearts
A kingdom rose around her feet, a tribute to her charm

That Alice was made Queen of this country
Turned her back upon the dream to rule it ruthlessly
The dream turned her mirror to a trick of the mind
She saw herself rot away before her very eyes.

Rin:
Two children ran to the woods one fine summer day
Len:
Tea beneath the rosebushes, they went out to play
Rin:
An invitation from the castle by the Queen herself
Rin/Len:
Their trump card was the Ace of Hearts

The fourth Alice was a pair of twins still young in years
Stumbled into Wonderland one sunny morning fair
Through strange doors and past strange things they marveled at the sights
Curiosity their strength, they wandered further in

Rin:
A stubborn older sister
Len:
A cunning little brother
Rin:
They strayed too close to first Alice
Rin/Len:
At the far end of the world

The dream had taken hold of them, their path forever lost
Trapped within their Wonderland, they never would wake up.
©2009 ~balnibarbi
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Author's Comments

Finally, i'm finished.

This is my arrangement of the English lyrics to Alice Human Sacrifice. More emphasis was put on rhythm than anything, so it sounds good when anyone sings it. A few of the phrases are a bit tricky, but they should fit perfectly with the original song.

I took a few liberties with the storytelling, but I feel that it keeps the same air.

Me and my friends are going to dub this in English, starting this Thursday or earlier. I'm cast as Len, Zeph is Kaito, his sister is Rin, the Raver Bunny is Miku, and I think Ayame is Meiko.

The song is not mine, I just translated it. The picture is not mine, I took it from the video.

Original video can be found here.

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:iconzephyrite:
Rock on. I can't wait to get to dubbing.
:iconbalnibarbi:
Same here.

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Live Action LenLenDance. <3

NoBrandCon 9 was a great success, but NoBrandCon 10 is going to be even more amazing! Whoooo!
:iconlaitma:
Wh-whoooah, man, are you SERIOUS? dubbed lyrics to a song? owo Holy CRAP, man! th-that's... that's just amazing. owo Amazing!

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我是红,你是蓝。
:iconi-like-yoshi:
OH. OOOHHHH. This is so awesome 8DDD!! I looove the lyrics! GAWSH, you finally made this song make sense in my head D:. FBJSHDNBFJDHKD ILUUU~.

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You know, I could survive without teeth. I'd be more than happy to drink my food through a straw if it meant I'd never have to see a dentist again. I'd even go through some kind of bionic surgery to get indestructible teeth. Like Wolverine :dummy:!
:iconbalnibarbi:
We're gonna start recording on Thursday, maybe. I just need to learn the tune to Len's part.

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Live Action LenLenDance. <3

NoBrandCon 9 was a great success, but NoBrandCon 10 is going to be even more amazing! Whoooo!
:iconbalnibarbi:
I'm glad it makes sense! <3 Some of the other English dubs have no sense of rhythm, and some...the voices aren't very good. Or both. I hope to amend this.

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Live Action LenLenDance. <3

NoBrandCon 9 was a great success, but NoBrandCon 10 is going to be even more amazing! Whoooo!
:iconayamekarisuma:
I'm going to mess up since I'm going to want to start singing in Japanese after hearing the song so many times before. lol.

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Of all the things I've lost I miss my mind the most. It fell into the gutter and has been there ever since.
:iconi-like-yoshi:
EXACTLY. And these make perfect sense D|. ghsjsnbdhfjbjdsbfffffff <333.

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You know, I could survive without teeth. I'd be more than happy to drink my food through a straw if it meant I'd never have to see a dentist again. I'd even go through some kind of bionic surgery to get indestructible teeth. Like Wolverine :dummy:!
:iconbalnibarbi:
Same here.

I don't even know what the tune is to Len's part. :iconimretardedplz:

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Live Action LenLenDance. <3

NoBrandCon 9 was a great success, but NoBrandCon 10 is going to be even more amazing! Whoooo!
:iconbalnibarbi:
AAAAAGH I RECORD ON THURSDAY-SH. I'm so excited.

And i'm gonna make a whole slew of cosplay videos, too, maybe even a live Kokoro/Kiseki one.

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Live Action LenLenDance. <3

NoBrandCon 9 was a great success, but NoBrandCon 10 is going to be even more amazing! Whoooo!

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